As per the drawing of your config, your frames are coming in tagged and leaving tagged as well, which indicates the Vlans are living on other devices, so, except for management of device, you do not need Vlan interfaces on these devices.
Bellow config should suffice (NB. Done from memory, not tested):
/interface vlan
add interface=bridge-vlan name=vlan99 vlan-id=99 #For access to and management of device
/ip address
add interface=vlan99 address=xx.xx.xx.xx/xx #IP Address for management vlan99
/interface bridge port
add bridge=bridge-vlan interface=sfp1
add bridge=bridge-vlan interface=ether5
/interface bridge vlan
add bridge=bridge-vlan tagged=sfp1,ether5 vlan-ids=4,17,424
add bridge=bridge-vlan tagged=bridge-vlan,sfp1,ether5 vlan-ids=99
/interface bridge
add name=bridge-vlan vlan-filtering=yes