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I don't have the equipment you have, so made no comment. But since you are wondering if your post was muted and want any feedback you can get, I will provide what I would do if I were in your shoes.
Is that really your complete config? Do you have more than a single bridge configured? Do the bridge ports show up as HW offload?
If you have another 10G pair of SFP+ modules (or DAC), you could do a better comparison by using the following config on the switch (note sfp2 removed from vlan 20, just to see if that is affecting performance, is there anything connected to sfp2? Also this is making vlan 20 tagged on both sfp-sfpplus1 and sfp-sfpplus4. This will allow you to use the exact same config on the PC as when you used just a single link directly between proxmox and PC (with PC configured to use tagged vlan 20).
/interface bridge
add name=vlanbridge vlan-filtering=no
/interface bridge port
add bridge=vlanbridge interface=sfp-sfpplus1 frame-types=admit-only-vlan-tagged
add bridge=vlanbridge interface=sfp-sfpplus4 frame-types=admit-only-vlan-tagged
/interface bridge vlan
add bridge=vlanbridge tagged=sfpplus1,sfp-sfpplus4 vlan-ids=20
/interface bridge set vlanbridge vlan-filtering=yes
If you get better performance, then add spf2 back into vlan 20 and see it that makes any difference.